SHITFACE (Dark Comedy, Romance, Drama - 106 Pages)

Hello! I just finished the first draft of my latest script, and I'm looking for feedback. It's a mix between Mean Streets, Before Sunrise, and Pink Flamingos.

LOGLINE: An alcoholic's life falls apart as his favorite dive bar gets ready to close its doors for good.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WxD_NRpA4WIUaEwPednw5l4CWCzLep_Z/view?usp=sharing

I just finished my first feature film, and as I get ready for its festival run, I thought I'd get a new script ready. It's one location, only a handful of characters, and it all takes place over the course of one night, in order to minimize the budget. I hope to make this my second directorial effort, so any and all feedback is appreciated. Thanks again!