Roughs - please critique/give feedback

Heya! I'm a first-time poster here, though I have a bit of an "unhealthy obsession" with those AITA stories narrated by AI over Minecraft screen cap videos. So maybe I’m not entirely unfamiliar with the Reddit world?

A little about me: I’m in my mid-40s and only recently became a nurse. But if you asked what I wanted to do when I "grow up," I’d still say comic books! More specifically, I want to bring my own story to life. These first few pages have been a slow (and I mean years slow) work in progress, and I recently dusted them off to start working on the story again. And wow, am I feeling RUSTY.

I’m hoping to get some honest insight and feedback on things like the narrative, character designs, figure work, and general flow before diving further in. This is still a very unfinished first issue, but I’d love some constructive feedback before moving ahead.

One note: Since I’ve been working on this sporadically over the last decade, you’ll see some inconsistency in the character models and overall style—just part of the journey!

Thanks in advance for any help you can give!