is my build ok for midir?

is this fine? i'm trying to all bosses on my first playthrough and midir is one of my least favourites, so i want to see if my build is the issue or if it's just a shit camera + skill issue

is this fine? i'm trying to all bosses on my first playthrough and midir is one of my least favourites, so i want to see if my build is the issue or if it's just a shit camera + skill issue