Heading Off, Prologue [High Fantasy, 651Words]

Hey, guys. Just looking for some feedback on the prologue of my high fantasy story here that follows a cHoSeN oNe executioner who bungles the execution of the Dark One after his axe shatters (maybe due to holy milk? Makes sense if you read the excerpt, lol). Have been tweaking this a ton while I'm trying to figure out how I want the rest of my story to go, and posted a shorter excerpt a little whole ago, but still can't tell if I'm making it better or worse. Would appreciate some thoughts on this excerpt.

Following chapter would see us introduced to the executioner, Garumund, who is an esteemed professor of Decapitatorial Sciences at the local university. He's a professional in his field not just some big burly, dumb executioner.

P.S. Apologies if it's blurry. Reddit compresses images.